Studio Brief 1, Design Process, Crit

The crit was in my favourite format, where you go round and write down what you think. This means you get honest feedback. We also had to write three questions for the viewer to answer which really helped so I can get ideas too.

The crit this week was really helpful because I was so stuck. One of my questions was which concept is the strongest? So with that question it really helped me to concentrate one strong idea and work with it.

The feedback however slightly split it down the middle, a lot of people like either my second or third idea, but they gave suggestions which was helpful.

I got the suggestion of using tree rings to show the numbers of the measurements, I like the idea because it works off my line idea, has an open audience and think it would work well. However I didn't really want to do that because I want to target a specific audience and see if people can understand that its for one type of audience. 

I think at this point I still need to think of a real concept I am happy with, I like the idea of using nature and textures which I think I will play with. The tree ring idea has given me other things to look at.