The feedback from the crit was not that good! Which I was a little surprised at, I asked three questions which were
1. Who do you think the target audience is?
2. Can you work out the concept?
3. Would you look at these in the shop?
To these questions most people said either they didn't know or no they wouldn't, which is really saddening but I think I know why.
I think I designed something for me that I liked and didn't concentrate on the concept properly.
I should of made the images look worn and old rather than use very bright colours.
Also I didn't think about the type as much as I could.
I found this brief really difficult and so in the end had to create something that I thought was ascetically pleasing and to be done in time. If I hadn't of struggled so much and had more time I think I would of been able to show the concept properly.
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